Bittersweet Candy Bowl

95. Love Again, page posted 11/4/16

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Author commentary

Veronica: At one point in the dialogue revision, Souppy had Abbey say “don’t be silly, I’m sure he deserved every word” and I was like “YIKES MAN” because Abbey’s not a weirdo gaslighter like that. “Don’t be silly” isn’t that horrible of a thing to say generally, but with someone as serious as Abbey, it takes on a whole new abusive streak. And that’s totally not Abbey :l

Oliver: Yeah, a lot of this chapter was about tweaking the balance for a lot of the tension and conflict underlying all these characters. It’s a tough life for Abbey.

Also we are at Youmacon! In Detroit! Right now! Go!!

Comments from around the web

Wow Mike that is really mature to say Sandy will be proud. Abby not so mature, I know he hates Paulo to the bone but Paulo is Daisy’s friend. Even if you hate your partners friends you shouldn’t act like that

Facebook: Saskia Roeffen November 4, 2016

Don’t worry Little Miss Drama Queen. He still loves you. lol

Facebook: Casper Felix November 4, 2016

At least Daisy is recognizing that she went a little overboard with Paulo and does want to reconcile with him, he just needs to start giving her a chance to come forward and apologies to him at this point instead of walking away, otherwise they won’t get anywhere like this.
And as I understand how Abbey feels about Paulo, I’m hoping that he does his best to not let Paulo get to him again and calm himself down. If Abbey feels that Paulo is a bully who loathes him, then he can’t resort to violence against Paulo again.

Facebook: Richard Walker November 4, 2016

Abbey is really annoying. He hates Paulo for talking to Daisy and then hates Paulo for ignoring her. This bitch needs to be ripped a new one.

Facebook: Victoria Long November 4, 2016

Honest Abe here’s having none of Paulo’s nonsense. Again, how many times before Paulo learns, or burns? Is this it? Or will Rachel let him have it first? This is like survivor. First Lucy’s voted off for a season, now him? :o

Tumblr: abbeyslilkits November 5, 2016